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I have really enjoyed reading through your work! It is extremely compelling and I genuinely want to read it for hours. The fact the Jonny and Gretchen are living out this legacy created by the adventurers before them is just so awestruck-ingly awesome. Your story is really exciting and action packed!! I love that your characters are traveling to find these clues, Jonny is always missing work, and there are these criminals fighting them every step on the way.
I just adore adventure stories like Jonny Crossbones with characters who go on adventures for the sake of it. Jonny has to be my favorite boy adventurer so far that I’ve seen! Without a doubt! I love his skeleton design and his gloves! He is just a well designed and really well thought-out main character. The world around Jonny is really well planned and drawn as well. The style you draw in is a perfect fit for the story. It really leads itself well to the iconic adventure tale. Reminds me a lot of the stories I read growing up and I really enjoy that nostalgia.
Anyways, I’m sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to find out if Jonny is going to get fired from his job!
Keep up the hard work and being creative!
The Webcomic Whisperer
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